Eek! Fixed it! Thanks for point it out. This is what I get for being distracted while I edit and doing something different - I wrote two lines and I wanted to compare how they landed before and after Heather's protest. I guess I forgot to pull one out!
Wow! Crazy story!
This is great, very much like a good roadtrip gone wrong horror movie plot 😁
One side note, in the middle it sounds like Frank picks up the cellphone off the ground twice
Eek! Fixed it! Thanks for point it out. This is what I get for being distracted while I edit and doing something different - I wrote two lines and I wanted to compare how they landed before and after Heather's protest. I guess I forgot to pull one out!
Great use of a real place's tragedy as horror backdrop! Well done!