The Ledger
A Power-Up Prompt Response
The horse picks its way down the road without being asked. It knows the way. Knows the smell of old blood and dry iron. The deputy lets the reins hang loose and watches the familiar shape of the town emerge from the scrub.
It’s late afternoon. The sun is sinking low enough to flatten everything it touches. The buildings sit where they were left, not ruined so much as finished. Wood gone gray and fibrous. Rooflines sagging into the interior. A saloon with its doors hanging crooked, one hinge sheared clean through. A general store with the windows knocked out and the shelves still visible inside, empty as ribs.
The horse stops at the edge of the street. The deputy doesn’t urge it forward. He studies the ground first. Hoofprints, uneven, one dragging. A dark scatter where someone paused too long. Blood dried almost black, soaked deep into the dust. The trail leads straight in to the center of town.
He looks down the road. A well squats there, the stone collar chipped and cracked. Its bucket gone. Someone has dragged himself to it and failed to find what he needed.
The man is sitting with his back against the low wall, legs stretched out awkwardly in front of him. Hat gone. Shirt dark with blood along the left side. He’s breathing shallow and fast. One hand pressed to his ribs, the other hanging loose at his side. A revolver lies in the sand next to him.
He looks up when the horse approaches, then reaches for his gun and aims it at the deputy.
“You’re a long way from anywhere,” the man says. His voice is dry, scraped thin.
The deputy swings down from the saddle, unconcerned. His boots make no sound on the dirt. He takes his time closing the distance, stopping well outside arm’s reach. The sun catches the badge on his coat and slides off it like it doesn’t care.
“I followed the road,” the deputy says. “Same as you.”
The man huffs a laugh that turns into a cough. He spits red into the dust. “Figures. You here for me?”
The deputy studies him. The way his weight leans wrong. The way his breathing stutters on the exhale. The way his eyes keep drifting toward the well and then away again, as if he’s already learned something from it.
“Something like that.”
The man squints, trying to place him. His gaze sharpens. “I know you. You’re that deputy. The one from Red Willow.” He grins, or tries to. “Weren’t you that lawman who let that wagon train get killed?”
The deputy doesn’t answer, just rests his hand on his holstered revolver.
The man shifts, winces hard, then settles again. “You let them roll anyway. Right to the vultures. Didn’t they take your badge?”
“The laws of men mean nothing to me,” the deputy says. “Not anymore.”
The man snorts. “Funny way to talk for someone wearing a star.”
“They were just convenient,” the deputy says.
Silence settles between them. The sun dips lower. Shadows stretch long and thin, reaching for the well.
The man swallows. “So what is this, then? Bounty? You a bounty hunter now? I can save you the trouble. There ain’t much left in me.”
“I’m not here to collect the bounty,” the deputy says.
He takes a small notebook from his coat and thumbs it open. The pages are marked, neat and tight.
“I’m here to balance the books.”
The man stares at him. Really looks this time. “You talk like I’m already dead.”
The deputy glances at the wound, the blood crusted dark and stiff but glistening in the fading sun. The man’s boots, worn thin at the heels. The long drag marks where he fell and got up again.
“You should’ve stopped,” the deputy says.
The man lets his head fall back against the stone. He closes his eyes for a moment, and lets the gun fall into his lap. When he opens them again, they’re clearer somehow.
“Yeah,” he says quietly. “So they tell me.”
The wind moves through the empty street. Somewhere, wood creaks as it cools.
The man gestures with the heavy revolver toward the horizon. “There’s a posse,” he says. “They’re coming to hang what’s left of me. They might get you too for what you did.”
The deputy doesn’t look back. He doesn’t have to. He knows exactly how many miles of road they have left, and he knows the road isn’t going to let them arrive on time.
“They’re late,” the deputy says, as he closes his notebook and tucks it into his possibles bag on his hip. “The road found them wanting. But you... you made it to the well. You made it here.”
“It’s dry,” the outlaw spits.
“Doesn’t matter,” the deputy says as he steps closer. As he moves, the shadow he casts doesn’t follow the sun. It stays long, pointed straight toward the man like an accusation.
The outlaw looks at his bloody hand, then back at the deputy.
“You’re at the station,” the deputy says. He taps the notebook in his bag. “And the ledger says you’re carrying a heavy load. They call you a killer in Red Willow. Said you took the payroll and left three men in the dirt.”
“They were burning the ranch,” the man whispers, his voice losing its raspy edge and becoming strangely hollow. “With the family inside. I did what I had to. The money—”
The deputy lifts a hand.
“No.”
He leans down to the man, close now.
“That’s what the world says,” the deputy murmurs. “But the Road doesn’t care about motives. It only cares about the weight of the feet that walk it.”
From the far end of the street, a sound begins to rise. It isn’t the wind, it is a rhythmic, metallic thump-shriek. The sound of wood groaning under an immense, invisible burden. The deputy steps back now, but his eyes don’t move from the man.
The man braces himself against the well and waits for the pain. It doesn’t come. He looks down at his shirt. The blood has gone dark, stiff at the edges. He straightens without meaning to. The motion costs him nothing.
That’s when his breath catches.
“I shouldn’t be standing,” he says.
“No,” the deputy replies.
The sound draws closer now. The deputy reaches into his bag and pulls out the notebook. He opens it and flips to a page near the middle.
“Looks like you’re light enough,” he says without looking up.
The man swallows. “Light enough for what?”
“To ride,” he says.
He glances past the man, down the road.
“If you weren’t,” he adds, “it wouldn’t be coming.”
The sound crests the far end of the street and becomes shape.
A coach rolls out of the haze, black-lacquered and plain, the sort that once ran freight and bodies between towns that no longer remember why they were built. Four horses pull it, heads low, pace steady. Their hooves strike the hard earth and raise no dust. The wheels turn without complaint. No rattle. No sway. It moves like the road itself doesn’t matter.
The man looks at the coach then looks over to the deputy.
“Road don’t go past here, does it,” he says.
The deputy doesn’t respond.
The coach slows as it reaches the well. A gradual surrender of motion, as if it has arrived at the only place it was ever meant to stop.
The man watches it come, his mouth slightly open. He waits for the jolt of pain that should follow the fear. It never does. His heart thuds once, hard, then settles into a quieter rhythm, as if it’s been told it can stand down now.
The coach stops. The man looks up at the driver’s bench. It’s empty. The reins hang loose, tied off in a simple knot. The door remains shut, patient.
“That thing ain’t right,” the man says. His voice sounds distant to him, like it’s traveling a longer way than it should.
The deputy doesn’t answer. He’s already looking past the coach, down the road it came from, as if confirming something he doesn’t need to see.
The man takes a step. Then another. He realizes he’s walking straight, unassisted. His boots feel lighter than they should. The ground doesn’t push back the way it used to.
He stops beside the coach and looks at it properly now. Up close, it’s ordinary. Scuffed wood. Iron fittings dulled by use. He reaches out and rests a hand against the door. It’s cool. Solid. Real.
“Guess this is mine,” he says.
The deputy finally looks at him again and nods.
“Looks that way.”
The man swallows. He glances once toward the well, then toward the road that leads out of town. For the first time, neither offers anything. No promise. No delay.
He looks back at the deputy.
“That it?”
The deputy only smiles a thin smile.
The man exhales once, sharp. Nods like he’s been handed a receipt.
He opens the door himself.
Inside, the coach is empty. Clean. Room enough to sit. Room enough to lie down if he needs to. He steps in without being told. The door closes behind him with a soft, final sound.
The horses lean forward. The coach turns without effort and starts back the way it came. The deputy doesn’t watch it go.
He takes the notebook from his possibles bag and opens it to the waiting page. He writes a short entry, then closes it.
The town settles around him, finished.
He mounts his horse and rides the other way, toward the next stretch of road that still thinks it’s going somewhere.
This is a response to Bradley Ramsey’s Power-Up Prompt #23.


Very interesting. I think I'm left with more questions than we started with. Lovely story.
Why does my mouth feel like it's full of dust right now? lol. Beautiful work.